Scarlet
Guitars strumming down to jazzed targetsmy heartbeat is silenced to the quietthat you hidelaughter rings out as the glass shattersmuch like her voiceshe always whispers in reciprocalprovocation, but...
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~Louise~Quote:TalithaMuch enjoyed this powerful spill, particularly the closing lines"While I dance on the sidelines in my needs holding my self-respect" I'm hugging you, Louise....because you see!!!...
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Quote:~ love the title, Chris, it drew me in.....and this closing rocks!!!!this one belongs back on page 1an interesting, often stormy situation, but a very powerful pour....well done!!!*huggsss*Sash...
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~dpg3~Quote:Talitha sounds like a friend in trouble never an easy situation to ne in, sometimes we just have to wait and pickup the pieces!!!!!!!!!!! An excellent read!!My thanks on your...
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Quote:(((Chris)))Only a fool is given to fighting the sea...and thou, assuredly, not such.Unlike some, perchance.Stay thy self respect...how I admire you for that, dear friend.John Ahhhh...but, John,...
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~Alana~Quote:~TR~ Great write sweet friend :) As always your superb imagery puts the reader right there~standing next to you...Always love what you pen :)You are the babe, you know that? Right there...
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Good morning Mr. B!!!Want a little chunky monkey for the journey?My thanks to you for peating and re-peating!! Always,TR
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Quote:crikey, mcgee...how in the hell are we ever going to get that book of yours published if you keep dropping me on the floor???oh... wait...that could be a good thing,...
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~Steph~Sidelining with self-respect often leads to recriminations...but in this case, I sooooo agree! Love ya!Always,TR
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Quote:Christine, you're amazing! *hug* ~Shae ~Shae~I'm glad you think so, but no....I'm just me....but thank you!!! Always,TR
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Quote:Lyrical prose echoes in the void.Nice work.seraph ~Seraph~I like that you said that..."echoes in the void"...how very, very apt! Thank you! Always,TR
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Quote:There is a whole lot here TR, in both worlds... A helluva piece, striking indeed... ***Clapping*** Bri~ ~Bri~A lot going on in all life...but there it is...My thanks sir, for your touch here, I...
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Quote:she plays with your chain, yanks down hardand I am watching your temptationstride with a promise into the Bermuda Triangle of Lustlost at seaYou are a brilliant writer, TR....this is another...
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Quote:It's tragic when we find ourselves standing in witness to a triangle of lust, watching helplessly with only a lifeline of our hearts to anchor us to the hope that the music of our souls will...
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~Cho~Quote:**Christine**Such a strong write that evokes so many emotions...Quote:------------------------------------------------------------I dont care what you have thereyou cant hear my music with...
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Quote:This has me look back at myself in some ways.Awesome write.((((((~Mikey~))))))Reflection is good..... Always,TR
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Quote:Quote:------------------------------------------------------------she plays with your chain, yanks down hardand I am watching your temptationstride with a promise into the Bermuda Triangle of...
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TR, there are some amazing lines in this piece powerfully conveyed with a real strength behind the words. Sensational writing!!Arthur"If a man had wings and bore black feathers, few of them would be...
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